( ...crying. Is what it makes him, slow to show, beneath the heft of his mask, tears streaming. No sobs, only a labour of breathing. He is impossibly still, intrinsically silent. )
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( ...crying. Is what it makes him, slow to show, beneath the heft of his mask, tears streaming. No sobs, only a labour of breathing.
He is impossibly still, intrinsically silent. )